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I wrote this as an ode to lost moments... moments in which we lose ourselves in a certain individual's beauty... and fall into that moment without a care in the world...

This poem is for those of us who have fallen for someone for nothing but an instant... and dared to dream within that moment...

Special thanks to "tragicstock" for the stock photo:

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:iconglorifiedsnapshots:
as always, your words capture perfectly everything i think and nothing i can put on paper.

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:icontouchedvenus:
This is just beautiful. You have a talent for capturing emotion with words. :)

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i gotta agree, i wish i can put such emotion into my writings, you got a gift

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thanks a lot... and u'll be surprised how easily words come to you when your inspired... thanks again...

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that was really good! its that first moment, that first touch, the first everything, wonderous and new all at the same time.

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Wonderful poem, which portrays and emotion preciselly, however, up against the dark red back ground, you begin to wonder whether this is dangerous emotion which to fall into.

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pretty much... this poem is about that spark we all know about... i believe, deep down inside, that even though we fall for it all to often, its a trap... the image portrays emotion and the idea of the ocean and a helpless girl walking towards it... not knowing what awaits her out in the distance shows us just how this spark may trap us... thus the name 'A Breathe Beyond Fate'... indicating that sparks are the enemy of fate... something a little more, which puts us in complete control of our own destiny... which is dangerous!

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:iconmatsuban:
nice use of image and text ^^

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wow... you've really captured that desperation and that almost lack of breath and feeling in those moments! I love it well done :D xxx

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very emonationl

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